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Friday 22 May 2020

Close To The Edge (Animation And Summary)


Opal and her mother are walking along a long dusty track on the side of a cliff hoping to find a new home. They are starving and thirsty. Suddenly they see a town on fire and smoke rising into the sky! As they keep walking down the track Opal sees a crack in the mountain and looks at it. Her mother has already moved on down the track. She can just fit through it so she walks through the crack into a cave. She keeps walking and steps in something. Something wet. Something that wraps around her ankles. And she knows exactly what it is.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Riki,
    I really enjoyed reading this and making this with you. It was interesting to see your perspective and the way you wrote it in your own words. I was wondering, if you done this over, would you have done anything different?
    Sincerely, Dr Joshua D. B.

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  2. hello Riki
    i really like your Close to the edge story and animation. you have good punctuation in your story and your animation looks cool i like the sun set and i like how you did everything well most of it on google drawings. how long did this take you?

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