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Wednesday 3 June 2020

Something Alive (Storyboard And Summary)

This story is about a girl who is most probably a teenager who was born in New Zealand. Her grandmother used to live in Japan but moved to New Zealand. Her grandmother now calls New Zealand home. But her granddaughter thinks that she isn’t just a full New Zealander. At school people ask her Japanese questions and expect her to know it but she doesn’t because she wasn’t born in Japan or even visited Japan. Her grandmother keeps inspiring her to read Japanese and write Japanese. She explains herself a badly translated haiku that doesn't mean the same in English. In the end she has learned from her grandmother a lot and she will keep learning.  

3 comments:

  1. Good job Riki i read your hole story and
    i like your story board that you did i
    really enjoyed it.the thing that you can
    improve on is that you can make it more
    inserting.by Rusty and no one else.

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  2. Thank you Rusty!
    I will try to improve on it.

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  3. Hi Riki i like your something alive story and the summery is good and the story board is to nice job but what you could of worked on was the story boards settings.

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